CONSTRUCTION: magazine advert progression

These were our first drafts of our magazine adverts, we felt like the image was too crowded with long lines of text which made the image less powerful and captivating.

The text of Semz and Zino were not bold enough and looked weak , however we wanted them to look powerful and effective in conveying the rappers to have dominance. This is the effect we wanted the text of their names to give, so we decided to change this.

In order for the names to dominate we decided we had to take away the long lines of text , by doing this we believed only using short punchy lines it made the advert more effective and more attractive.

We also thought in order to make it more realistic it was key to add all various types of media platforms in which their music and profiles are accessible.

Because of these things we redrafted and came up with this.

This is our Magazine advert.